You posted this in the songwriting forum, so I guess you want suggestions on composition. Move it over to the MP3 Clinic and I will have a LOT to say about the massive proximity effect of the vocal.
I'm just curious what you're aiming for. The lyrics as I heard them asked, "give me one good reason to fuck up this song." Are these filler lyrics that you plan to redo in the future? I noticed your site dates the song to 2011. If you were planning on adding lyrics, no time like the present. Or is this kind of a novelty/throwaway song that is supposed to be ostentatiously obnoxious? If so, were you looking for suggestions at all?
I though you had the nucleus of a catchy song here, but to me it's an artifact from an early stage of the songwriting process. Do you want to develop it?