I am writing a mellow acoustic ballad, will put soon here the recorded version, but meanwhile, I would really appreciate some feedback regarding lyrics:
Thanks beforehand!
Verse
hey bro, why you’re are smiling
hey bro, why you’re so sad
in this time of the changes
brutal ages,
cruel fate
and blindfold hate
hey bro, why you’re are smiling
hey bro, why you’re are so sad
in this time of the changes
phoney angels,
lonely days
and loveless nights
Chorus
Hey bro I miss you tonight
Hey bro I need you tonight
Hey bro I want you beside
deep in heart we’ll never be apart
hey bro, you’re always smiling
hey bro, you’re always young
in this time of the changes,
ruthless ages,
blind fate
and failed state
hey bro, fate’s divided us
hey bro, clock’s stopped for you
in this time of the changes
and wreckless ages,
you’ll always stay young
and be gone
Hey bro I miss you tonight
Hey bro I need you tonight
Hey bro I want you beside
deep in heart we’ll never be apart
Thanks beforehand!
Verse
hey bro, why you’re are smiling
hey bro, why you’re so sad
in this time of the changes
brutal ages,
cruel fate
and blindfold hate
hey bro, why you’re are smiling
hey bro, why you’re are so sad
in this time of the changes
phoney angels,
lonely days
and loveless nights
Chorus
Hey bro I miss you tonight
Hey bro I need you tonight
Hey bro I want you beside
deep in heart we’ll never be apart
hey bro, you’re always smiling
hey bro, you’re always young
in this time of the changes,
ruthless ages,
blind fate
and failed state
hey bro, fate’s divided us
hey bro, clock’s stopped for you
in this time of the changes
and wreckless ages,
you’ll always stay young
and be gone
Hey bro I miss you tonight
Hey bro I need you tonight
Hey bro I want you beside
deep in heart we’ll never be apart