Hello Everybody,
Here a song I wrote few years ago and I would like some feedback and help on the guitar parts if possible. the acoustic guitar on the right is bit sloppy as I did it with bar chords and my little hands are not the more powerful someone could have.
Eventually the arrangement on the electric guitar could be improved during the song, if anyone would like to have a try I will much appreciate it, I'm working on improving my techniques but still not yet there.
For the vocals I had a bit of a cold so there is some pitching issues at times and I will have to do it again.
The bass was done with my keyboard but I would like to do it with a proper bass if someone would like to try and experiment that would be awesome.
I can provide the track(wav or AIFF) without bass and guitars
Anyhow thank you in advance for your feedback and support much appreciated
https://soundcloud.com/crycookie/edge-of-history-rough-mix
Here a song I wrote few years ago and I would like some feedback and help on the guitar parts if possible. the acoustic guitar on the right is bit sloppy as I did it with bar chords and my little hands are not the more powerful someone could have.
Eventually the arrangement on the electric guitar could be improved during the song, if anyone would like to have a try I will much appreciate it, I'm working on improving my techniques but still not yet there.
For the vocals I had a bit of a cold so there is some pitching issues at times and I will have to do it again.
The bass was done with my keyboard but I would like to do it with a proper bass if someone would like to try and experiment that would be awesome.
I can provide the track(wav or AIFF) without bass and guitars
Anyhow thank you in advance for your feedback and support much appreciated
https://soundcloud.com/crycookie/edge-of-history-rough-mix