MANnequin X
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I want to make this better yet. Is it good? What improvement does it need? Vocals? Somebody told me the drums weren't good, but they are the only part I did not write. Am I writing music to the drums incorrectly? I'm trying to figure out why the chorus part of this song(the part I'm wanting feedback for) isn't the hit that I thought it would be with people I've showed it to so far. Thanks?