Please let me know what y'all think

It works.

The good. You have the voice for the style you are playing. Sounds natural, very comfortable.
The bad. You have pitch issues. Which is pretty common if you don't record or sing enough. If you can't hear yourself, you can't correct it. Most of us can't hear our mistakes when just playing.

Couple of suggestions, first, don't be disappointed that you have a few vocal issues. You can't become good by just wanting to be good. Takes work. You could get a vocal coach to help you work through the pitch issues, or you can record, listen and retake until you get it to where you like it.

The first way is the fastest (and the best way), but it costs. The second way is a little harder in that you have to hear the problems and then know how to correct it. Trial and error. Many have done it, but many have had help as well.

If you really want to do this, maybe as a hobby or more serious, get a band, do recording, etc. spend some money for a coach, get your pitch issues sorted out, understand how to use your voice and I think you could be a good singer. You will just need some time and effort.

Hope this helps.
 
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