How's my singing?

[highriser]

Hey guys,
just wanted to know what you think of my singing here. I'm always trying to improve so constructive criticism is welcome!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oXE0VwZ6Jrg

[AaronGeorge]

Very good.

I would give Billy Joel's "Just The Way You Are" a try for your vocals as well.

[wheelema]

I'll just throw this out; I was expecting more growl, more emotion in that song. Not sure if that makes sense. Nice voice, I just don't think that particular song plays to your strengths.

[joeym]

It's a voice you can work with and your ear's pretty good.
What I notice:
You have to work on your timing and phrasing.
In the chorus you struggle a bit to reach the notes on the "Come Together". You're trying to push your chest voice over its limit and that's harmful. This you can overcome with voice training, especially in the mixed voice region.
Work more on your dynamics. You sing the song on one continuous level.
Hope this helps.
Cheers

[madfresh]

You got a good voice. I think you got great potential. As advice I would say try to add more feeling and attitude in your singing. Otherwise, real nice job. Keep it up!

[ashiels1983]

great voice

[highriser]

thanks so much for the critiques. Joeym I definitely here what your saying, I thought I was pulling up chest but then again I was going for a heavier rock sound. I also see what your saying about the vocal dynamics, playing around with soft and loud would be better.

Check out my new cover of I won't give up I posted it on this forum