Please Critique My first Music Video

[alphadelta80]

I'm a producer/recording artist in the process of recording a solo LP. My first video "Crows Feet & Reading Glasses" was shot/edited by a friend of mine. It was the first music video he's ever done. I think he did a decent job. Of course there are things that could've been done better. I like that it's so unusual. What do you think? Link Below.

A.D. Weighs - Crows Feet & Reading Glasses - YouTube

 

[alphadelta80]

I forgot to mention..... I'm the rapper/producer/singer on the record. And I recorded and mixed it in my home studio. Please feel free to give feedback on the song/audio quality as well. Thank you for your time.

 

[loominarypop]

Definitely a very good job, you've got style! It's a little bit messy but it somehow all fits together

 

[Protocall]

hahaha, this is great!! very entertaining. you got a unique voice

 

[alphadelta80]

Thanks for watching.

 

[hhinterwebz]

i really like the beat