My Summer Music Video

[vertikal]

Hey Guys!
I shot this video to one of my tracks last summer and now I'm finally putting it together. I'd love to get some feedback as I am planning to release it in a few days. Thanks a million!

https://vimeo.com/116924827

 

[StoneJack]

Hate to say that I hate the video.
I liked the opening scene, when a singer looks into camera, establishing eye contact just like she is going to tell you something..
but then you've shown just some scenes together of the singer with someone.. no story, no emotion, no start and no conclusion..
you don't know why she looked into a camera if she wasn't going to tell you something..
in addition, its a bright day, means no romance here at all, just a bright sunlight..
sorry for my rant

 

[vertikal]

'its a bright day, means no romance here at all, just a bright sunlight..'
Can't argue with this logic, romance during work hours! what was I thinking?!

Thanks for the feedback!