Besides B roll, you can try to get several different shots of you miming the same section of the song--wide shot, close up, profile then put them together in editing. You do some of this already but some more extreme angles could cut in nicely.
Also, don't feel you have to be performing in every shot. Driving through the "bad" part of town, walking by/into/out of bar, whatever catches your fancy could be makde to work.
I agree that you location is a bit pretty for your musical style--it doesn't look like you have an industrial part in your town but even some shots in a back alley or something might help the mood. Or ask from some help on the forum for somebody to shoot you some stock shots of an iron refinery or coal burning power plant or something.
Finally, your background graphic makes your opening title almost unreadable.
Edited to add: do you mind saying where you are? Some of your shots look a lot like Waterton Lakes Park in Canada--if it is, I have many fond memories--I grew up in the Calgary area and that was a frequent holiday destination.
Last edited by Bobbsy; 11-15-2016 at 21:43.
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