Wonder is Discontent

The drums are too outfront - you can hear it clearly during the piano solo. They work during the rest of the track, so maybe you should mult them and treat them differently during the piano solo.

Vocal up a bit, please.

The drum hits might be a bit loud during the outro segment.

Really enjoyable arrangement. That was good. I was wondering why you were posting so much stuff here. Now I know. You're up to something. Well done.
 
The 1st half of the intro reminded me of side one of LOW or HEROES - with the movement of the train (?) giving me the V2 Schneider sense.
I like the Bach organ build.
Vocal intro - wow cool.
Distorted/distressed vox work wonders too.
Are those real horns at 4.04?
Mid way through 4 mins I thought this might be an overture.
That bass is a chameleon changing it's tone to suite the segment of the suite.
I in the middle of cooking the evening meal so can't listen too closely. I'll re-listen tomorrow after work.
Proggy as all get out.
 
During the singing, the drums are definitely too loud. During the part where the vocals are distorted and lead part after they are fine. The vocals seem very tightly compressed, it might be the EQ or lack of any reverb on them.
 
35 seconds before anything actually happens,
may be a bit too long.....

i dig the organ intro,
it's got a nice introspective vibe to it, and not hurried...

nice vocal intro....
reminds me of mastodon a bit....
dig it.

i like the drum mix as is....

i like the center section, reminds me a bit of floyd's Pigs (Three Different Ones)

it's funny, the horn section reminds me of zappa for some reason..
but the bass line, is like a disco era throwback.

i'd say, this tune is fully schizo, which is great!
 
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