That is a very interesting tune. I listened a few times and was primarily struck by the fact that the singer has a very nice voice...reminds me a bit of that guy from the Smiths. I did think the voice was a bit up front or on top of the mix or something...a bit dry too, but it is certainly very clear.
It is hard to evaluate a mix coming though myspace's player and this is kind of an eclectic mix to begin with from the sounds of it. However the arrangement is very interesting despite being somewhat sparse.
The drums sound kind of dead to me - especially the snare...the kick is somewhat absent. I like the idea of the drum part, but the timing seemed off enough in places that it was distracting (like 2:00 - 2:04). They are really busy in places, which I don't mind, but they need to be tighter I think for this to work better.
I think the outro sounds a bit cluttered...I like all of the elements, but would prefer that some be pushed back a bit in favor of highlighting just a couple of the things you have going on here.
Anyway, don't take my word on any of this as I am by no means an expert, but those are my thoughts. I like the song - very creative
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Cheers!
