Nice track HeavyMusic! Some of mixing advice I would give would be to reduce the reverb on the drums. The dryness of the guitars and the reverb-ed drums don't mesh well. The drums also need some panning, so not all the parts of the kit are center panned.
I like how you gave room for the bass if you wanted to put on in (which I feel this song could need). I enjoyed your guitar playing, and I can't wait to hear the finished project if you intend to work on it more.