Cool track. I'm not really getting a "sounds like" sense from this, which is great. Pretty unique sound (at least according to what I am familiar with). Well balanced overall. Good sounds.
From a personal and subjective standpoint based on how the mix is coming across in my space:
Something about the hihats seems off. They are wide, like they are in stereo or something. Is that because they are maybe being picked up heavily in the OH's and offset by a close mic or something? In any case, if this was on my desk, I'd try to monoize/centralize that somehow.
Vocals get pretty ess-y. I don't have any experience with female vocals, but I feel like I would try to fill out the body/thickness and evenness of her vocals with a parallel compressed track that has a focus on the 240 - 280 range. I'd set up the compression to be distorted and harmonically rich so the lower region of the vocals are enhanced. Once getting the ess and low mids evened out, I'd probably spend a while going through the song section by section and automating the levels to make sure she is always gelled but sitting on top. I might also drop the ambiance of the vocals a bit so that they are a little less 'floaty', but I tend to prefer drier production choices, so that (like all of my thoughts here) is highly subjective.
Ah, how I love a good pick slide.