The Surface Of Things

[david baker]

Any constructive feed back on this mix in progress of this Dawson song would be welcome.
Thanks

 

[Crazy Luke]

Your snare brush sounds like a vst and mechanical - unless you are going with that effect, you might want too put a bit of tape saturation on it to make it sound more real (you could also put a bit of reverb on it, so it doesn't have such an abrupt decay time).
Other than that nit-picky point, this mix is pretty good, as it features the main vocal clearly above the instrumentation - which is important for this lyrics-driven song.

 

[andrushkiwt]

very cool, i like that brush sweep sound a lot during the verses but not so much in the chorus. great vox, that's a great sounding delay on them too.

i'd like to hear some originals from you. great vocals man.

btw, i know a david baker, lol. baltimore though, not Wa. state. nice track dude

 

[david baker]

Thanks for the input , Will Give that a try. Cheers

 

[david baker]

I Cant take credit for this song it is by Andy Gullahorn. Released in 2013, on the album Beyond The Frame. Thanks for the feed back on the mix though. Cheers