Just wanting to get some ideas for adding to this rough draft (and rough mix) of a new tune I'm working on. I don't know if the title has been used befor or not - I googled it and didn't see anything exact? I also know the song calls for better lyrics / vocals - but I'm trying to get the basic flow of the song structure itself down. Right now it's only 2 minutes long - but I'm not sure of what to add.
Any suggestions are appreciated!

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