See the World

Should probably go to the MP3 Clinic. I'll move it for you.

i gave a quick 30 second listen. I think you should put the vocals in the same space as the rest of the instruments. They all have lots of delay and/or reverb and the vocals do not match. It sounds like you added the vox over top of a pre-recorded instrumental track.
 
Chili said:
Should probably go to the MP3 Clinic. I'll move it for you.

i gave a quick 30 second listen. I think you should put the vocals in the same space as the rest of the instruments. They all have lots of delay and/or reverb and the vocals do not match. It sounds like you added the vox over top of a pre-recorded instrumental track.
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Thank you Chili for your response. If you listened only the first 30 second you probably missed the chorus? In verse, the vocal are dry and things change in chorus. I wanted to make it like that but maybe I try to change things in verse and see how it sounds.
 
This is quite a track! Sounds like you put a lot of time and work into this. I thought of that Africa song by Toto. Also I can hear a little Kansas in this and some other 80's stuff I can't put my finger on. The vocal is what I'm talking about right now. Who do you sound like.......? I don't think the vocals sound separate, but they are very majestic! First thing I thought of was the Lion King :P.

Overall definitely above average track. Mix/Song/Performance/Arrangement, all very good and better than most.
 
midget said:
This is quite a track! Sounds like you put a lot of time and work into this. I thought of that Africa song by Toto. Also I can hear a little Kansas in this and some other 80's stuff I can't put my finger on. The vocal is what I'm talking about right now. Who do you sound like.......? I don't think the vocals sound separate, but they are very majestic! First thing I thought of was the Lion King :P.

Overall definitely above average track. Mix/Song/Performance/Arrangement, all very good and better than most.
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Thanks Midget, i appreciate you feedback. Yes, it's always a lot of work and time as I'm doing all by myself. But it fun and it's also nice to get some feedback occasionally. Thanks again.
 
midget said:
I thought of that Africa song by Toto. Also I can hear a little Kansas in this
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There's no place like home!

I really enjoyed this. Obviously the drums are very loud and I guess that's intentional.
I'd want to pull them back a touch all the same.
The cymbals in the chorus came across a bit strong to me.

I like the toms as a feature at the start, but I'd probably want to bring them down in the choruses so they don't become monotonous.

Epic vocal. ;) Thanks for sharing.
 
Steenamaroo said:
There's no place like home!

I really enjoyed this. Obviously the drums are very loud and I guess that's intentional.
I'd want to pull them back a touch all the same.
The cymbals in the chorus came across a bit strong to me.

I like the toms as a feature at the start, but I'd probably want to bring them down in the choruses so they don't become monotonous.

Epic vocal. ;) Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks Steenamaroo. I wanted to keep those toms loud through the song although I brought them down after the first intro / verse. I have to check that again.
 
I couldn't get any of the links to work so I listened to this one. It's the only one I could find so I assume it's the latest mix?



I really like this. The whole package is really good. Performance, delivery, capture.

My only nit would be that at some points the vocal seem to get a little buried under the fantastic instrumentation, mainly in the chorus. It's still very audible though so it's not a problem.

Top job all round! :thumbs up:
 
Mr Clean said:
I couldn't get any of the links to work so I listened to this one. It's the only one I could find so I assume it's the latest mix?



I really like this. The whole package is really good. Performance, delivery, capture.

My only nit would be that at some points the vocal seem to get a little buried under the fantastic instrumentation, mainly in the chorus. It's still very audible though so it's not a problem.

Top job all round! :thumbs up:
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Thank you Mr Clean. I just tested that link (my latest post) and it's working for me. Weird. And yes, the one you posted is the same version:)
 
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