Retro Lover

Decent song. Pretty bleak, but generally cool.

"His friendship they shun" is an awkward wording.

The vocals sound a little close. I'd add some reverb and maybe turn them down a notch or two.

I'm not sure I caught the connection between the verses and the chorus?

Overall, I liked it. It was catchy and very poppy and upbeat for a song about murder! :D
 
Thanks V.H.Steve,

Hey, I just got tired of writing banal lyrics like "My baby done made me cry..." sort of thing. So why not revenge? I read in the Times the other day that this is often the motive behind female suicide bombers (e.g. Moscow just last week) and as for kids packing guns to school to get even...

Thanks for the response.

K.
 
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