Snowman999
Active member
You're more than welcome to talk about the really bad mix here. But, I'm really looking for the Snow problem question of "Is my vocal in key".
I've melodyned it, and the backing vocals. But, I'd really like some great ears to tell me if there's anything that's still pitchy.
While I truly want to know if any of the vocals are pitchy, the lead vocal is most important. That's what I'd be giving a real singer to learn from.
Here's the lyrics to make it easier.
Shelly brought to work
A rubber dick in a bag
Her beautiful smile
Hid the fact she was sad
Four mouths to feed
A fifth on the way
Absentee husband
Tonight's the dildo's day
Shelly worked security
Though she was far from secure
She found out the hard way
Some illness has no cure
Laura christaned her son
Her lover by her side
She worked slept and ate
For the only man in her life
Evil minds will say
Laura signed the book
Sealing her son's fate
With a kiss of forbidden fruit
Laura worked security
Though she was far from secure
She found out the hard way
Some illness has no cure
Virginia sat alone
Cutting cuts she cut
Virginia eats alone
Everyone believes she's nuts
George the punk rocker
Wanted to live on top
He had no talent
All he had was a pension for shock
Do they remember his unique stock
Do they remember
Like I remember
Thanks in advance.
I've melodyned it, and the backing vocals. But, I'd really like some great ears to tell me if there's anything that's still pitchy.
While I truly want to know if any of the vocals are pitchy, the lead vocal is most important. That's what I'd be giving a real singer to learn from.
Here's the lyrics to make it easier.
Shelly brought to work
A rubber dick in a bag
Her beautiful smile
Hid the fact she was sad
Four mouths to feed
A fifth on the way
Absentee husband
Tonight's the dildo's day
Shelly worked security
Though she was far from secure
She found out the hard way
Some illness has no cure
Laura christaned her son
Her lover by her side
She worked slept and ate
For the only man in her life
Evil minds will say
Laura signed the book
Sealing her son's fate
With a kiss of forbidden fruit
Laura worked security
Though she was far from secure
She found out the hard way
Some illness has no cure
Virginia sat alone
Cutting cuts she cut
Virginia eats alone
Everyone believes she's nuts
George the punk rocker
Wanted to live on top
He had no talent
All he had was a pension for shock
Do they remember his unique stock
Do they remember
Like I remember
Thanks in advance.