NotThatBright
New member
Wrote and recorded this last night. Lyrics are stream-of-consciousness crap that I wrote in 15 minutes, so no deep meanings there... I was focusing on coming up with some riffs and putting them together. Sound and performance is not at the level that most stuff on this site is, but what are you gonna do, I have to pretty much fake my way through everything but the bass. I'm just curious if anyone doesn't think the song is crap. I think it's decent, but I was weaned on this type of stuff. Anyway, feedback is appreciated, positive or negative, and advice welcome.
https://soundcloud.com/user92696274096/blame/s-0x0AN
SOME OF US ARE FRIENDLY
SOME OF US ARE CRUEL
SOME OF US MANIPULATE
WHILE OTHERS PLAY THE FOOL
SOME OF US ARE MARRIED
SOME OF US DIVORCED
SOME OF US ARE RUDDERLESS
AND VEERING WAY OFF COURSE
SOME OF US UNFETTERED
SOME OF US IN CHAINS
SOME OF US UNSHACKLED
BUT HELD PRISONER BY OUR BRAINS
SOME OF US DENIERS
SOME OF US BELIEVE
BUT ALL OF US DESERVE THE FATE
THAT WE'LL ONE DAY RECEIVE
YOU WON'T FIND ME RUMINATING
YOU'LL FIND ME IMPAIRED
BUT IF IT'S WISDOM THAT YOU SEEK
THIS MUCH OF IT I'LL SHARE
THOUGH WE HAVE OUR DIFFERENCES
WE'RE ACTUALLY QUITE THE SAME
WE'RE BOTH PART OF THE PROBLEM
BUT I SAY YOU'RE TO BLAME
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SOME OF US ARE SINNERS
SOME OF US ARE SAINTS
SOME DON'T KNOW JUST WHAT WE ARE
BUT KNOW JUST WHAT WE AIN'T
SOME OF US ARE HOPEFUL
SOME OF US DESPAIR
SOME OF US NAIVE ENOUGH
TO THINK THINGS WILL BE FAIR
SOME OF US ARE PLEASANT
TIL THINGS DON'T GO OUR WAY
SOME OF US WILL LOSE THE GAME
BEFORE WE EVEN PLAY
SOME POINT OUT THE OBVIOUS
JUST LIKE THIS FUCKIN' SONG
TO DEAL WITH THOSE WHO WOULD BETRAY
THE PIMP HAND MUST BE STRONG
YOU WON'T FIND ME WITH A FROWN
BUT LIKELY WITH A SMILE
I MIGHT EVEN TAKE THE TIME
TO BULLSHIT FOR A WHILE
THOUGH WE HAVE OUR DIFFERENCES
WE'RE ACTUALLY QUITE THE SAME
DON'T CARE WHO CAUSED THE PROBLEM
IT'S YOU I'M GONNA BLAME
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GUITAR
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YOU'LL KNOW THAT YOU DONE GOT ME PISSED
WHEN MR. HAND BECOMES MR. FIST
AND SLAMS INTO YOUR FUCKIN' JAW
AND THEN YOU'LL HEAR ME SAY... (NELSON'S HA-HA)
https://soundcloud.com/user92696274096/blame/s-0x0AN
SOME OF US ARE FRIENDLY
SOME OF US ARE CRUEL
SOME OF US MANIPULATE
WHILE OTHERS PLAY THE FOOL
SOME OF US ARE MARRIED
SOME OF US DIVORCED
SOME OF US ARE RUDDERLESS
AND VEERING WAY OFF COURSE
SOME OF US UNFETTERED
SOME OF US IN CHAINS
SOME OF US UNSHACKLED
BUT HELD PRISONER BY OUR BRAINS
SOME OF US DENIERS
SOME OF US BELIEVE
BUT ALL OF US DESERVE THE FATE
THAT WE'LL ONE DAY RECEIVE
YOU WON'T FIND ME RUMINATING
YOU'LL FIND ME IMPAIRED
BUT IF IT'S WISDOM THAT YOU SEEK
THIS MUCH OF IT I'LL SHARE
THOUGH WE HAVE OUR DIFFERENCES
WE'RE ACTUALLY QUITE THE SAME
WE'RE BOTH PART OF THE PROBLEM
BUT I SAY YOU'RE TO BLAME
-------------
SOME OF US ARE SINNERS
SOME OF US ARE SAINTS
SOME DON'T KNOW JUST WHAT WE ARE
BUT KNOW JUST WHAT WE AIN'T
SOME OF US ARE HOPEFUL
SOME OF US DESPAIR
SOME OF US NAIVE ENOUGH
TO THINK THINGS WILL BE FAIR
SOME OF US ARE PLEASANT
TIL THINGS DON'T GO OUR WAY
SOME OF US WILL LOSE THE GAME
BEFORE WE EVEN PLAY
SOME POINT OUT THE OBVIOUS
JUST LIKE THIS FUCKIN' SONG
TO DEAL WITH THOSE WHO WOULD BETRAY
THE PIMP HAND MUST BE STRONG
YOU WON'T FIND ME WITH A FROWN
BUT LIKELY WITH A SMILE
I MIGHT EVEN TAKE THE TIME
TO BULLSHIT FOR A WHILE
THOUGH WE HAVE OUR DIFFERENCES
WE'RE ACTUALLY QUITE THE SAME
DON'T CARE WHO CAUSED THE PROBLEM
IT'S YOU I'M GONNA BLAME
--------------
GUITAR
----------------
YOU'LL KNOW THAT YOU DONE GOT ME PISSED
WHEN MR. HAND BECOMES MR. FIST
AND SLAMS INTO YOUR FUCKIN' JAW
AND THEN YOU'LL HEAR ME SAY... (NELSON'S HA-HA)
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