the pan from right to center feels rushed an pointless cause it comes in so quick. I like the tone of the acoustic. the mix sounds lopsided in balance though. The cymbols sound miles away from the snare and the rest of the mix I'd balance the piano and acoustic on the other side piano on left guitar on right I like the tracks it's very well tracked. I'd bring the strings up more after the solo.
the repative solo electric guitar lick "duh dah" comes in way to early in the song bring it in after the acoustics get going build your layers up and introduce them to your audience slower don't worry about movment in your mix till you get the elements in line. pan automation has to go with eq automation I normally slow my mix to 1/2 speed and double check when doing any moving pans, but thats a pro tools only trick I think, also the sqeeky strings use elixers or spray it's a tad distracting
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