Lol, sounds real good, I love it. It has a sort of sarcastic feeling to it. I hope this doesnt offend you, but I could see this as a soundtrack in a dark comedy while two people are killing themselves.
The drums lose it in two spots, but it really captures a great groove towards the end. Keith Richards has some solo stuff like this, Roy Orbison esq stuff.
Really enjoyed the listen, welcome to HR!