The mix sounds really good to me. Cool song too. Really like how it picks up toward the middle with the tambourine.
I wonder if bringing the vocal forward just a little in the verses would put it in a sweet spot. The bass seems a little dull to me (just the tone). Maybe making it a little dirtier wouldn't hurt?
Is this mastered already? It feels very loud to me.
If I'm listening to the lowered bass, I'd say to still bring it down a bit. Or at least until the big guitars kick in around 1:00.
sounds really good to me, nice writing as well. Good vocals, share anything on how they were recorded?
I didn't find anything to be too wide, not sure if that was addressed in the new mix or not. I also thought the guitars in the chorus were a touch loud, but not a huge deal.
Only thing I can think of is that the VI that comes in at 2:23 could be made more clear. it's kind of piercing and indistinct.
This sounds really good, great job.