Its a really cool jam!
Ok love the synth tones you get. You're really creative on these jams...love the panning choices. It just needs some screaming wha wha guitar and a Curt Cobain style vocal!
Great work as always brother!
I didn't listen on headphones, but I can imagine what VHS said is true. It's short, and sounds cool on speakers. So you might want to leave it in. I wonder if you can pull the panning a little towards the center, i.e., don't send it so far back and forth.
Cool sounds all around. Great low end. Drums sound great.