I was going for Bonham-type beefiness
The low end - both kick and bass - are pretty rumbly. I'd roll some low end off.
If the tune said everything you wanted it to say, it's done Ya know? On to the next one
Love the bass drum and snare sound on this. This thing struts with a big butt.
There is wash or graininess on the crash cymbals. Not sure if it's phase or mp3 conversion or if you've got compression hitting them weird. Multiple things can cause that.
Cool tune man!
I see what others are saying about the guitar not being in Perfect time but I think it sounds very cool as is. Too much precision and eq tweaking can rob the groove of power and feeling in my opinion. Don't get it too sterile and lifeless.
I like it a lot!