That mic is well back. Is that a J12?
Hey Rob - great suggestion!!! - I posted a new mix up top. I had totally forgotten that the ba ba ba stuff WAS a placeholder. So I hauled out the pumpkin gretsch and ampeg and had my way with it. Doubled the guitar line up an octave and panned slightly left and right. Tweaked the piano, panning, vocal levels, string levels and it is starting to dial in. Couldn't get a substantially better vocal take so I said screw it. It is what it is. I can live with it and it's time to move on
Yes! Love the guitar on the new version, and how the ba ba's now just come in at the end. Excellent
Oh man. I absolutely love this new, 04/02 version!
The vocals sit much better now...the strings, piano and brushes all sound sweet, and that new guitar part really ties everything together and gives it a whole new focal point. You still have a raw sound here, but it has a little more polish which I think it needed.
You may know I have a '60's reverberocket that looks almost exactly like your amp. They have the best reverb/tremolo and are perfect for the sort of stuff you do. I may try a mic father back like that. I always just jam it right up in the grill, but I like the sound you got here a lot.
Really nice remix. Thanks for posting it.
I'm glad you kept at least one set of bababas. I really liked them, but the trem guitar sounds great. It could probably even come down a hair.
Did you do some eq work or something on your vocal? It sounds a little more crisp in the new mix.
Mix is good - I'd maybe take the tremolo guitar down a touch but other than that it sounds very good.
The melody is very cool, the jump from low to high is a popular modern style. I'm thinking Coldplay etc.
Your upper vocal part is great. If that is your max range then I would keep that intact and work on the lower part i.e. rewrite it so it doesn't go as low (not the music just the melody). I know - that's the way you wrote it - but if you're looking for a smooth transition between low and high section then work with what you have vocally. Your great writing skills are such that I believe you could revise this and it would still be as melodic - just different.
Great song !