It's nice that it's brighter, but it sounds a bit too bright now - as if the whole thing had a spotlight on it and as if it was viewed through a slight fisheye lens. I listened to the first one you posted. Here's what I'm hearing on this one: some timing issues on the new guitar part you added. I think the vocal would benefit from a de-esser. (Take the new plugin off - does the sibilance disappear?) Also, it's a bit too loud now, I think. (Take the new plugin off - does the level drop back to something more balanced?)