chrisharris,
I noted the harshness on Soundcloud but it's only Soundcloud.
It is intentionally mono and is about mono. Perhaps it's metamono? The bottom end is thinned as mentioned. I wouldn't have thought it was lofi, though it doesn't conform with the generalist definition of high fidelity which is focused on the audio being in a stereophonic image.
I also have a stereo version of the track but the mono makes sense to me.
I didn't mix for streamers & the mastering job was not done with those formats in mind either.
The .wav & 320MP3 don't have the harshness you refer to - though the silly guitar in the intro is overly bright.
Thanks & Yes, Robus it's finished.
I'm not after mix hints.
Interestingly I don't hear Sex Pistols recordings as harsh.
As it went through a few versions in the clinic and benefited from suggestions in there I did as I usually do:
posted the finished product so that those who took time to listen during the journey had a taste of the destination.
Faint Aroma and Softdance have, similarly, been posted in their final versions after the former's short life in the clinic and that latter's various incarnations since 1st posting in 2006.
Trackrat - thanks mate.