The song doesn't start from silence. There is a high pitched hum that starts maybe a half second before the opening drum fill. Maybe identify that and kill it off.
There is something odd going on with the drum fill at 1:22. The toms sound a bit distant, and something seems to click at the end of the fill - I mean like a noise click - like when a track is still making noise and has been trimmed and clocks out or something. Same exact thing at 2:40. Some editing there I guess. I am thinking you took the best version of that fill and stapled it in there lol.
The ending fade - I don't think you have to press so hard to end it there. It seems a bit short. I know your guitar parts didn't go on any longer but just drums and bass would be okay for a few seconds - at such a low level at the end of the fade I don't think anyone would notice anyway.
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