Levels are off. Woah loud when it kicks in. Shouldn't be that loud when it all kicks in. The vocals are buried, starting at the intro. The intro vox are also pretty muddy, at it's not meshing with the acoustics that occupy lots of the same range. Again, those rhythm guitars are way too loud....think we found your main instrument
Second verse vocals are up a bit, so they must be on a separate track. Get the intro ones up too. Toms sound nice, nice low end ring. Second chorus, really loud rhythm guitars again. The third verse is WAY brighter than the opening...what's going on there? If they are from the same take, then just copy and paste the third verse EQ onto the opening, because man those opening vocals are dull/muddy compared to the rest. Do a fast back-and-forth between 3:10 and 0:17.... yeah, do you hear that? Completely different tone. I didn't think the drums were that bad, just a little more variation in timing is all you need. Some of the quick hits, with the whole band, are so in sync that it does give a programmed vibe, so just don't have everything right on the line all perfect, ok?
I would leave the master bus stuff on and mix into it. There's a good overall tone to the song, just needs level and EQ adjustments on some individual tracks. Make sure your limiter isn't chopping off some crazy amount. 2-4db is plenty. A compressor before it can tame the most of it. Again, 2-4 db GR.
There's something really good in there and it's really close to making it out. Get the levels and EQ right. Nice work.