My primary criticisms are the drums.
I'm not sure how they were recorded, but all I can really hear are the cymbals, toms, and a little bit of snare. The kick is barely there at all. If you mic'd the kick by itself, I'd try boosting one of the clicky frequencies (4k-5k or 10k, maybe a little bit of both). I can tell during the end ("Lied to... lied to...") that the drummer is running on the kick but I'd like to be able to hear it.
In general the kick could come up quite a bit.
The snare could maybe use some slap (Maybe a not too narrow boost at around 4k?). The snare could come up too.
If all you recorded was a couple of overheads or something you might not have this option, but you can do a lot to even out a drum kit with mic placement and the room the drums are in.
The toms sound pretty decent to me.
As far as everything else goes, everything is pretty wet, lots of reverb. That's a creative decision (that I happen to like on this song) but I think some of the distorted guitars are a little too wet. Others sound just about right.
Clean guitars sound cool, but too high in the mix during the verses.
The singing is nice, just a little pitchy in a few spots. Otherwise very good.
I really dig the song itself a lot. For some reason I get a Sisters of Mercy meets Metallica vibe.