Feedback on my new track (exceptions)

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powerbob247

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I've applied some principles about panning given to me and hope ive done an ok job, pretty simple but for a newb getting to grips with mixing it takes a few takes to sink in, there arent any vocals yet, as i need to study getting a good consistent vocal all the way through before i try vocal again, plus the eq and stuff that the voice needs, again all feedback appreciated
Thanks


https://soundcloud.com/stevemeyers/exceptions-stereo-mix-non
 
In the intro I think the right panned guitar is louder than the left. In the intro from 0:26 onwards when the lead guitars drop out after each riff I feel it's noticeably lower in volume, so I'd maybe think about bringing the lead down a bit there.

The lead guitar during the verse could have a bit more going on, it's a little bit repetitive in the first verse. I guess that you're doing a progressive thing as it's louder and more progressed in the second verse. Maybe it would benefit the song having that in the first verse too? Just an idea.

The tone is good. The playing is good, the song sounds like it could be really great with the right lyrics. I had a listen to the first mix and this mix is like 100x better.

It's difficult to give a massive critique with vocals but that's the stuff I'd look at, get the lyrics done and get it posted! :)

If you feel like it, have a listen to my song in this thread here and tell me what you think: https://homerecording.com/bbs/gener...linic/give-me-my-remedy-new-rock-song-383030/

Thanks.
 
No mate. I made 2 posts in this thread, I only intended to do one, therefore double post. Scroll up, it's right there.
 
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