That sitar sound, on the left, pretty early on, seems a little far back...i think it could use some more attention. The kick and snare seem the most front and center, so it makes the little pieces here and there take a backseat when I feel they should be the attention grabbers. make sense? Also, there were times when I thought a 16th note, with accents, hi-hat would help support of the long pauses between snare and kick hits. I know you throw one in there near the end, but perhaps because it was centered, it didn't really do justice to the beat and kindof washed into the background too instead of carrying the beat. I'd have to see/look at the MIDI for the drums to really comment specifically on how I'd enhance the beat.
Listened to the first version in the OP.