Dont lock me inside

paokz

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Hello there! I wrote that track with a small diaphragm microphone
what do you think?
 
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The timing on the pickup when the lyrics first come in is a little iffy. The bgvox have some timing issues too; they echoes aren't really fitting very well.

So you tracked the vocals with the SDC, and the rest is in-the-box?
Did you do the tracks yourself or get it pre-mixed from somewhere?

If the former, it sounds a little "swishy". There's a lot of sound in the upper registers that's washing things out a little. (If the latter, that's still an issue, but you can't do much about it)

It's a nice song. Probably almost there.
 
The background(kick, bass, and synth) sounds pretty stellar. Did you create that or is it a pre-made backing track? The twangy guitar sounds a little out of place in this song but it grows on me the more I listen to it. The vocals don't sound bad at all but I agree with VHS that the backing vocals sound off. Sounds really good though.
 
Yeah i know the backing track sounds little off
and the whole production were built from the scratch

i recorded the whole track with a microphone cost 35 dollars so i tried to make it as much profesiional as it could be
 
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