dilemma (nelly remix)

[twistedmetal333]

where do i even begin? no, seriously.

hi, i just discovered this forum. i also just discovered Logic about three months ago. i have an Impact LX25 keyboard and a Blue Yeti Pro Mic for (occasional) singing. i also have 16 years of experience studying and playing music.

with that said, this is probably my best "studio" production, which i use loosely.

if you hear something you think could make this better, or give me more depth, or if you just have an idea, i would love for you to share it with me, as i am crawling around in the dark with my only experience being limited functions within the program itself, stolen from the occasional YouTube tutorial.

with that said, here is "dilemma (nelly remix)."
soundcloud.com/simontacchi-brothers/dilemma-nelly-remix

if you want to ask what my musical intentions were, by all means. i warn you now that i don't have the most common arrangements

 

[TripleM]

In the intro I think there is a synth loop that you chopped off a bit too fast. At the end of time through, the last note has an unnatural decay. It happens on other loops. So maybe it's intentional?

The song never goes anywhere. Just loops.