I enjoyed this but I'm late to the commentary so you have probably figured it all out now. I notice Greg likes the drums, and I would take his advice before mine on that score, but I feel the kick is a little "boomy" for the style.
A quick perusal of the comments suggest the mixing of the guitars has been covered, The guitar at the intro is too indistinct, as is the lead.
A quick perusal of the comments suggest the mixing of the guitars has been covered, The guitar at the intro is too indistinct, as is the lead.