good tune Strat! I'm sure you mentioned it before, but what do you do? Are you the singer? I like the vocals a lot..
There is a certain lo-fi sound to your tunes.. I noticed it on 'love and war' as well.. That sounds a little better than this, but very similar.. The sound is less of a problem for me because I liked the tune.. Kinda bass heavy, but I like that.. Lacking some highs on this one though..
That whole part @ 2:45 ish is great! I don't know how to make this better, although I know it could sound a lot better.. sorry I'm of little to no use in the way of help, but I liked it just the same.. I wouldn't have minded some more solos earlier on or something..
I just let it go into 'love and war' and that has a bit more highs, but shares the same problems for the most part..
good tune! Maybe someone with a clue can help you...