Mixing Feedback Needed

[massimo7000]

Hello, everyone! I recently recorded and mixed this track, but I don't want to put it out to the public until I get feedback and do what I can to make it sound as best as it can (Public dropbox link below). In particular, I'd like to know if the vocals sit into the mix just fine, but let me know if there's anything else that stands out or needs fixing (This is a fan song, so meaning might not make sense, but I just want feedback on the mix). Thank you!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12786776/Song for Scootaloo (Mix5).wav

 

[sparky123]

love the rhythm section ( bass ,drums guitar) a little to bright for my tastes. i would give it a listen and bring the lead vocs up a touch and see what you ya got. very clean sound . good job

 

[mjbphotos]

Try the MP3 Clinic section of these forums. And use a streamable place (like soundcloud) for your file, many people will not d/l a file from a stranger.