Mix this 2 tracks (Guitar + Vocal) Acoustic indie song!

Hey, here is my mix. Nothing big, I just did what I though felt right. This song is beautiful!

PS : Can I put this song in my portfolio?


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Thanks!, yeah you can put it on your portfolio, yeah you didn't put too much on the editing which is good, but the guitar is slightly panned to the left am i right?, I would say i think the guitar is lost in the overall track, maybe popping it a little bit, because the vocals sticks too much , thank you for your time :)
 
Here's my quick try.
Love the vocals and timbre! Excelent ;)
Anything you need just PM.

See you around.

I love it! the panning from the guitar! my ears liked it:))! .. you were trying to get that moody-feel weren't you? It great but i think the reverb is overly-done but that might be just my opinion, thank you for mixing it!
 

i like your approach on making the track simple :), i think there's too much low-end mid-ish. It has some highs in it but i think it lack a little bit. But that may be just my preference when it comes to song, but nothings wrong with it, thank you!
 
Just a guess ,,. Mixed on headphones? Vocals sound like they might be doubled and panned right, which might be creating some minor phase issues. I like that its not overdone, but it sounds a little "in the head" to me.

Love this song !! What is your artist name though ?
Here's my mix, i went for something spacy and smooth, Let me know what you think :)
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Definitely on headphones haha, good guess!
nah i used a chorus on the vocal to fatten it up a lil bit, had it through an aux track. but didnt reference them on monitors as it was a fairly quick mix.
 
Here's my take. The song really started to grow on me after a few run throughs. Feedback would be nice ;)
 

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Just gave my mix a listen on clean ears and the guitars are muddy and vocal needs de-essing. Will correct and repost
 
Tried my best, it's actually my first time mixing acoustic.. Kind of felt the atmosphere of the song and now it's seems like a guy and a girl sitting next to each other and singing at a local gig in the pub :)
Didn't do tons of rev and no delay at all. no pitch correction and all this bs, all natural is best!
 

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