yo check out my new beattape and mixtape

watch your input levels, sounds like your vocals are clipping sometimes and sometimes adlibs don't line up right. Vocals also need lots of eq and maybe some other effects. A better mic would probably help a lot, sounds like you're using a built in computer mic or something. Also listen to your mixes on lots of different speakers to check how it sounds, lots of the levels are off. beats are a little crazy, but sometimes it's interesting. keep workin at it
 
like that

Curtis mayfield sample. It sounds like you need some mixing. Its all a little muddy. You got some interestingly subject matter, Positive ish so keep working it .
 
Quit adding needless "esses" to what you type in order to sound "legit", and more people will take you seriously.
 
yeah man the beats seem wayyyy too quantized, like a drum machine. tr to add some human feel in there, like q-swing or something like that. Try to get a better microphone, use some compression on your voice, maybe some reverb to mix it up a little bit. and eq the voice much better.

keep it up, T
 
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