We Keepin It Raw Feat. Celph Centered & FrozD

has that deep felt bass in it .. vocals come in good ..lyrical content keeps you going.... hook is less hype than the 1st verse.....2nd verse a little low harder to hear sounds good it just dont punch through the mix.....3rd verse is the same situation as the first.

The first verse sets a tone and energy that the rest dont maintain. lyrically all are raw and the beat is strong i would raise the vocals or eq them so that they punch through the mix more
but hell of a job tho

holla back atcha man
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Beat's tight.

I like all the verses a lot.

Not too keen on the hook, I think it needs a bit of work - it doesn't stand out enough, maybe all 3 of you could do it?

good track.
 
Yo Micflow,

I agree with Abyyss. The verses are strainght, but the hook just kinda lets you down after hearing the first verse. It's not that it's a bad hook, just drops the level of excitement in the song. I think maybe you could add some ad libs on the hook on certain words you know...but overall the shit is tight.


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Tight shit MFlo. y'all connected nicely on this joint. This is the first time ive heard u on a non story telling song. I may be tripping but on the hook u put me in the mind of Mos Def mixed with that dude from RAM (Rage Against the Machine)
 
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