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16 - I really like it, but you added a bass note, some place, and the note is B. It doesn't fit much - you oughta lower the pitch, and put it to A instead. Maybe you missed the note on the piano roll in reason... it's so tiny it happens to me sometimes to. But check out your bass line i'm pretty sure changing the B to an A is really gonna make it sound better. Besides that don't change anything, everything else is very good.

28 - The guitar is pretty good... did you write it using an instrument in Reason or did you sample it somewhere else? Anyways I like it a lot :).

35 - Very good, I love those kind of beats, its sort of relaxing. :)
 
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