"Poetry Club"

can i get in on the cipher?

this is an extended verse to a rap that i'm currently working on
it's about me not being a killer, but being capable of killing. i'm trying to tell other people to be more self concious in there actions.


i'm a humble man,
i aint't never hurt nobody
there's no intentions of putting six feet of dirt on your body
now, i'm a little older, life is a little colder
cats come a little bolder
with bigger chips on thier shoulders
hating on me, as if i was a high roller
my cousin died young
me, i'm trying to die older
i'm trying to cross over dog
and meet jahova
a lot of these devils really wanna take me over
i keep my temple clean
cause i can see them when i'm sobre
but now a days if feels like hell is freezing over
when i lay down at night i feel demons breathing over
it's a tug of war between good and evil,
i'm leaning over
if he who comes like a thief in the night
the seasons over
the wise say "beware the swift strike of the cobra,
stay away from the pig it's desease is much slowa
most of all be aware of man
cause history will show ya
the evil men can do
can constrict you like a boah
read the books of kane and abel
king solomon and noah
history repeats itself,
it all must end"
think about that player
the next time your blood is rushin
before you load that extra clip
or the chamber revolves
your problem isn't solved
your problem just evolved.
 
let's go abyss...

they must be passin out E cause these emcees square
if you could see my face you'd see an empty stare
you could never be me, my skill is simply rare
if you think your rhymes are sick, well the remedy's here
when i step in the ring it's just not fair
cause i couldn't kill rappers with less of a care
gettin cash, stackin math, with a flash and a flair
computer generated sims get a grim and a glare
who said that over there? rip cats from here to the uk
think i'm about to lose a battle to you? ummm, k...
i don't even need to bruise you to do you
my words will likely lose you, have somebody cue you
your exit is stage left, that there's your best bet
cause when i get on your case there aint no death threats
its just bomb first, that's how americans rep
and i ain't met a foreign rapper who could do that yet


PUT YOUR GLOVES ON...
 
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Re: let's go abyss...

leonardjamaar said:
they must be passin out E cause these emcees square
if you could see my face you'd see an empty stare
you could never be me, my skill is simply rare
if you think your rhymes are sick, well the remedy's here
when i step in the ring it's just not fair
cause i couldn't kill rappers with less of a care
gettin cash, stackin math, with a flash and a flair
computer generated sims get a grim and a glare
who said that over there? rip cats from here to the uk
think i'm about to lose a battle to you? ummm, k...
i don't even need to bruise you to do you
my words will likely lose you, have somebody cue you
your exit is stage left, that there's your best bet
cause when i get on your case there aint no death threats
its just bomb first, that's how americans rep
and i ain't met a foreign rapper who could do that yet


PUT YOUR GLOVES ON...
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Aww shit...... I'ma pan yo' ass now! :D

But not now, I gotta go out - but I'll be back! :D
 
So you're an agraphobic citizen, scared of the best,
You think that ya' clever but you just proved what I said,
I'm tired as hell an' I'm still wingin' this rhyme,
I can barely see the screen so this is just a filla line,
Ya' holla US, UK hate on ya' mind,
Ya' obsessed wit us, it's on ya' your teeth that we grind,
But maybe you'll find that I'm not your enemy,
But you want it now so that's just fine with me,
Bitch this beef now, you're lovesick ova me,
But I'm straight so ya' betta watch where you ridin' G,
If that's what you are 'coz u a killa ain't you?
You a big boy now - you hold a gun don't you?
Every single person is a biological weapon,
That could let lose at any moment dependin' on how much they've been stepped on,
I don't need no gloves or shoes, dog - I know where I'm steppin',
Into the mind of mushy man who don't think just keeps reppin',
Anyone, not even attempting to think for a second,
But don't worry we wouldn't want a lifetime habbit to end,
It's just like jug said,
You got bricks in yo' bed,
Thinkin' that u hard man coz u pull a trigger,
Anybody can do that how come u don't figure?
I'd normally put a complicated word in now,
But I can't be arsed so I'ma leave you breathin'.......... for now.

Don't think it's as good as my first one - what do you think?

As I said, I don't normally diss so this is a first, so reviews are helpful.

Oh, and anyone else can still post here - forget about this beef; it isn't real anyway, it's just us practicin' our skills - I want more posts from more people - stray you back now: you have no excuses! :D

(BTW I am tired, that's why I don't think it's as good)
 
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Abyyss said:
C'mon guys, don't chicken out now - this is where everyone shows what the board has to offer! Don't worry about it not being good; not everybody on the board is good!
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pay attention...

well, well, it's about time Abyss spoke up
right now my eyes hazy cause i just woke up
your rhymes are gettin lazy, too much smoke, huh?
"he talked bad about my country"....i'm so broke up
don't get it confused fans, this is me and Abyss
it's the second round playa, why you call for your clique?
i guess it just goes to show you, you ain't ready for this
i'm steady with this, cut you like confetti with this
and i'm barely impressed with ya lil "mushy man" line
or you insinuating that i'm a tushy man, fine
i'll just destroy ya lil ego, see bro i ain't evil
i'm killin cats with skill, c'mon playa keep it real
and f--- the president, he couldn't be a hood resident
but his actions are the same; in war we ain't hessitant
you better get a dictionary, this is battle not beef
what's beef? beef is puttin holes in ya cheek
what's beef? beef is when you die in ya sleep
and don't think i'm havin all that cryin and weepin
i don't see how you think it wise to "let me breathe"
is it just me or does abyss sound like that kid named streets?
you're a baby in this battle so i'ma feed and bottle you
one more weak a-- rhyme and i'ma have to throttle you
and i know that this abrasive language may bother you
but if you don't get some balls, these kids will never follow you
Holla duke...


one more thing, "habbit" is one "b" not two
but you're a b----, i mean abyss - we'll add a "b" for you
 
daMN

it's getting heated up in hear between some folks. let me get a six pack and my lawn chair and enjoy the moment.
 
Re: pay attention...

leonardjamaar said:
well, well, it's about time Abyss spoke up
right now my eyes hazy cause i just woke up
your rhymes are gettin lazy, too much smoke, huh?
"he talked bad about my country"....i'm so broke up
don't get it confused fans, this is me and Abyss
it's the second round playa, why you call for your clique?
i guess it just goes to show you, you ain't ready for this
i'm steady with this, cut you like confetti with this
and i'm barely impressed with ya lil "mushy man" line
or you insinuating that i'm a tushy man, fine
i'll just destroy ya lil ego, see bro i ain't evil
i'm killin cats with skill, c'mon playa keep it real
and f--- the president, he couldn't be a hood resident
but his actions are the same; in war we ain't hessitant
you better get a dictionary, this is battle not beef
what's beef? beef is puttin holes in ya cheek
what's beef? beef is when you die in ya sleep
and don't think i'm havin all that cryin and weepin
i don't see how you think it wise to "let me breathe"
is it just me or does abyss sound like that kid named streets?
you're a baby in this battle so i'ma feed and bottle you
one more weak a-- rhyme and i'ma have to throttle you
and i know that this abrasive language may bother you
but if you don't get some balls, these kids will never follow you
Holla duke...


one more thing, "habbit" is one "b" not two
but you're a b----, i mean abyss - we'll add a "b" for you
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Hey - we pickin' each othas raps ta' pieces now?

OK. BTW, I told u I wuz tired last night - that's why all the spellin' mistakes were there an' I gave a half-arsed attempt. Take that back :D

Here's my proposal:

Fuck the world. ;)

lol. I might post summit up but I'm busy workin' on the collabo at the mo. An' just for the record: I never said I was mad u talked bad about my country, I said u were obsessed wit us.

It's all good though. Peace.
 
It's heating up in here. This is the first time I'm reading this post, definitely a bunch of talented writers in here.

Abyyss said:
Stray - how about you kickin' summit?
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I don't freestyle, online or in person, so I won't go there and I haven't written anything that's finished in a long time. I appreciate the invitation though.

Stray
 
we aint never scared

it's not that at all, it's just that everone else is trying to rhyme on tracks that's all. not to be taken negatively.
 
Maybe the dissin' is puttin' people off? Either way it's beginning to drag on a bit.

Here we go, prob. the last one I'll post - I really need to concentrate on getting vocals rec'ed for the collab.

**I know most of the "complicated" words, BTW - so don't give me no dictionary crap!*

2 disses, the result is this,
Should I fire a full stop and remove that whine from ya' lips?
'Coz everything that comes out is an agglomation,
We could both reach an agreeable situation,
If we tried hard enough and put aside our two nations,
And I ain't patriotic so quit the discrimination,
Ya' getting excited over a spelling mistake,
Which wouldn't be noticed if rapped so it's obvious ya' fake,
I'm spitting this rhyme aggrandizing myself,
You say I need a dictionary you should get one yourself,
Your lookin' up aggrandize - here, I'll spell it out,
[beat stop]
a..........g...........g...........r...........a.......n.............d...........i......z.......e
[beat begin]
There you go: plain and simple for someone so small and stout, (hah,ha)
My mushy man line was weak, I said I was tired: what now ya' blind?
Catch back up cuz - ya' trailing behind,
(What's beef?) - damn now you using other people's rhymes?
(What's beef?) - that just removes credit from ALL your lines!
It's the final push, ya' ridin' with me?
Or are we still enemies?
Nemesises till we die,
At each others' throat, cunning and sly,
At least I am - you're way too negligible,
Aww you crying now dog, what you want - a cuddle?
Described in car terms I'm Schumacher,
Ya' just a confused old man, a direction asker,
It's obvious just to read that you're losing,
Coz ya' writing skills just keep reducing,
Leon you ain't a rapper - stick to producing,
It's over now, I won't respond anymore,
I've had a rest and made up for my negligence before,
We can negotiate now and both be winners,
Or you can continue living the lie that you a killer,
Notice the lack of foul language in this track,
That's what they call a classic comeback.
 
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oooh shyt

i'm not one to instigate, but yall are really battling it out in here. damn. i don't really like reading rhymes from other people. i prefer to listen, but you both are making it pretty interesting.
 
All these hifi ass ni**as that figure
cause they bandwidth is a little bigger
they can post all nite and day
leavin links to hits but none for 56 k
Yal some generic cats justa label and a name
yall forgot bout 56 when cable stepped in the game
spittin that "you need to get cable on the real"
cool gimme yo address so i can send you the bill
Its all good but it aint all great
I met a guy last nite thats still 28.8
told me he been downloading a track by two guys in a hoodie
But by the time he got it was an oldie but a goodie (the want efx)
So cable cats come correct when you im a link
before you assume cable just stop to think
Is he hifi lofi or should i just put in the mail
do morse code , smoke signals or attach it to a snail
and all you hidin out ni**as,cant give my email out jiggas
comin with excuses like juices thinkin i wouldnt figaa
that the trust aint there but lets be real about that
same distrust you got you gettin right back
I dont know you dont know nobody that look like you
cause on the real i aint seen a face to compare one two
but dont take none of this serious cause its all 1's and 0's
and the only people that cant see that is either bitches or hoes..

DETROIT NUCKKA WHAT
this is what happens when you stay up to late and get up to early
 
Dont take this shit personal just shit that gotta be said
after my last post i was checkin the thread
came across the batlle and you know i'm down for a fight
aint no sides i'm givin out 2 ass whoopins tonight
hope in the end we can all be friends
but if not fuck you and fuck you again.
who the hell told soundboy he could spit
he can barely make beats talking all that shit
Who the hell told yall that yall asses could rhyme
if it wasnt for this text shit yall would be at the back of the line
no good delivery and fucked up sayings
big words got niggas hoping & praying
you'll stop cause you makin they head hurt
you think its fire but to them it sounds like gurt de gurt gurt gurt

Keith murray tried that shit thats why now he only do cameos you might want a better role model i suppose
let me make this clear for ya both so ther is no mistake
Beef.. is a cow or a steak on a plate
anything else is just niggas talkin shit
trying to connect and make it seem legit
And yo stop talkin patriotic shit like you gettin paid cash
cause evry time we go to war they cant find yo ass
If they asked you to go youd be shittin ya draws
but after they gone you be spittin that Lou Rawls (If i Coulda Woulda Shoulda)
yea I know that last one was over ya head you probably wont get it untill you are dead
Let me end this with a shut the fuck up
an of course somebody put some thing in they mouths cause my zipper stuck.

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I know i have just signed on to the biggest ass chewing of the century .hahahahaah i'm a mad man.hhahaha
felaz we all cool its all in fun so just do the dam thang.
you started this abyss. ding ding ding come out swingin
This thread was a good idea good lookin out
 
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Ha. Nice work soundboy (or would you rather call u beatmakers - u got 2 names an' it'd be easier only callin' u one) can't battle right now but I might post summit up for ya' later. Good to see more people replying.
 
Maybe it'd be cool if we like started posting proper poetry here as well as rhymes - maybe some cats'd be comfortable wit that?
 
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