BANG!
Guess who's here?
Aight, let's get this sorted out.
Remix joint -
Beats pretty good, im liking in but i feel its a little bare at points. it don't really go wit the track cos they all got hard-hitting verses so you would've needed something hard-hitting but the beat itself is pretty good - mix could use a little work. YOur verse was pretty tight (damn all these american people who have decent rap accents makingit easy for them and then me finding it hard cos i have a low voice a british accent [modern-day yorkshire] making it hard). And your verse goes well with the beat for obvious reasons that it was made for the beat.
Ooh -
i'm feeling the the sequencing on the drums though i would've had slightly different soudns - but these are a strong part to the beat. that sample you're using is pretty hot and goes well. the piano-ish is kinda nice maybe not quite the right sound though. the main melody is ok - instrument is aight but it gets boring after a while, could use plenty of change-ups. the strings when you have them are coo but need to be a bit louder in the mix imo. This beat is ok but is pretty much the same all the way through except you add the instruments bit by bit, i think it needs more change-ups (not just taking out parts, etc. but changing the melody slightly, etc.) maybe you could have a few instruments that pop in for a bar or so every now and then.
Keep it up.
