you need to make the intro shorter..its needs a really catchy hook (which i think they have) tempo needs to be faster..you goin for the club feel not the pimp feel...the beat might need to be change to fit a faster feel to it..right now the song song like some pimp type flow..not ready for the mainstream masses..
you want to be able to have a song that the masses will remeber once they hear it...and when its in the club it knocks..and pack the flow..on the lines of that Party like a Rock Star..Rock ya hips... you have to have a sound that will compete with that comin out of alabama..because that where you goin to start marketing the song..