New Beatz>>>>

since i'm rather untalented in rapping i'll just go with a few comments :D

that has good potential. i'd work more on the music itself, which is not developped enough, you know like... they lack something, so work on the musical part i'd say. if you want suggestions or want me to be more precise, just email me.
 
ok
not sure if you know this but your songs are only coming out of the left channel even on Hi-fi

the "something" that is lacking is a cohesive drum pattern
meaning your percussin and main kicks and drums do not follow a set pattern on some of the songs

and im guessing you are using fruity loops?
because all of those sounds, sound like the pre-rendered ones in that program
try downloading some new .wavs or sets

peace
LB
 
LiquidBronze,no, i'm not using fruity loops :D i use roland d2 groove box. How come I'm hearing the beats on both sides of my speaker??
I'm not sure what you meant by the drum patterns don't follow a set of pattern on some of the songs. Can you be more specific?
 
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