My rap joints

Yo sorry i have been missing in action fellaz last two weeks i been in the lab on the slab for them dollars. but i'm making my rounds now and hittin every body with that said:

sound quality is horrible. beat is horrible this sounds like something you would here in a black porno. i feel like a pedophile for even listening to this. look shorty not tryna tell you what to do but dont play yaself on that i'm a female so i must portray my self as a piece of sex(to not sound harsh). flip ya topic and try it

second song oh shit its to late this one once again selling sex. SEX DONT SALE IMAGERY DO. FUCKIT I CANT BE NICE NO MORE
THIS IS GARBAGE IT WONT SELL AND IT DAM SHO WONT GET YOU ANY STREET CREDITABILITY ALL IT WILL GET YOU IS A TRAIN. i'M NOT SAYING QUIT BUT GO BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD AND RE INVENT YOURSELF. YOU HAVE TALENTS OTHER THAN SEX EXPLOIT THEM YOU WILL BE HAPPY IN THE LONG RUN.

(sorry if I came off to hard but i have been noticing a lot of sugar coating on the net lately and that shit aint even about to start here on Home REC. Those hard as reviews i got from you cats in the beginning is what helpedd push me)
 
ya fa real? they play these kinds of beats on porn videos? yo I gotta see me one of those..lol..
and oh, soundboy, don't you feel like a phedophile..I'm 18.
 
YO CHICA SOME PEOPLE TAKE SHIT HARD YOU SEEM TO TAKE IT IN STRIDE IF YOU NEED ANY HELP LET ME KNOW. I GOT YOU
 
yo chica you wanna do a remix on one of your songs ill do the beat and spit 8 bars on there and you go ahead and do the singing. I bet I can make it hot. BTW I like your courage and confidence...youll get better just keep at it
 
pretty chica:

if you fly as fuck you might have something...if not go back to the drawing board..

ps if you fly where you rest at?? ;)
 
YungPoke said:
yo chica you wanna do a remix on one of your songs ill do the beat and spit 8 bars on there and you go ahead and do the singing. I bet I can make it hot. BTW I like your courage and confidence...youll get better just keep at it
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aiight. we can work it. you remix one of my beats and you and I can rap to it. Yo I want you to remix the first song I got up there "Smooth". YOu want me to send the beat to you so you can start workin on the beat? leave me ur email addy.
 
hey teacher, you know I wouldn't name mah self Pretty Chica if I ain't fly. hmm..i might post a pic... but i wan see yall too

oh and soundboy, it's all gravy, baby. I'm luvin the feedbacks keep em comin boo.
 
feedback from a non rap-oriented listener

Hey,

I never visit here, so I thought I'd check things out. I have noticed that the best rap records not only have great beats and a rapper with a great style, but that the songs had structure. Neither 'smooth' or 'pants' give a real sense of song structure.

Not all of the rap recordings that have stood out over the last 10 to 15 years had a strong song structure, but most have. These two cuts song very much like the beat was started and the rapper raps.

Phrasing (called "flow" here?) is also important. Most others are correct in saying that the muffled mix on the vox is part of what hides the phrasing here.

Also, while hip hop slang and dialect down-plays traditional uses of english language structure and grammar, many of the most compelling rappers actually use diction and vocabulary to great effect. I realize that casual conversation (which is what forum communication is) will not necessarily reflect this, but to the point of not going for the overt sexual approach - maybe an alternate approach will work? Perhaps putting some lyrical twists in the rhymes will help distinguish your efforts.

Good luck!

J-
 
I won't comment on the artistic merit of the song, but from a sound quality & mix perspective both of those songs are absolutely horrible.

Boomy, muddy, distorted, noisy - and all NOT in a good way. If you're serious about doing your own recording, and care about sound quality, then you have a lot of work to do to learn/develop engineering skills.

Maybe check out a few books on basic recording techniques, and hang around some of the engineering forums at this site to learn techniques.
 
Blue Bear Sound said:
I won't comment on the artistic merit of the song, but from a sound quality & mix perspective both of those songs are absolutely horrible.

Boomy, muddy, distorted, noisy - and all NOT in a good way. If you're serious about doing your own recording, and care about sound quality, then you have a lot of work to do to learn/develop engineering skills.

Maybe check out a few books on basic recording techniques, and hang around some of the engineering forums at this site to learn techniques.
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what r u doing in these neck of the woods? i thought u were a rock n roller? :p
 
rar it up people.

I think the best advice I could give you, chica, is to find what drives you. Rap about that, keep varied and keep recording and writing. I have the problem, I've been working on my writing for ages but not that much my flow so it's well....... not the best to be said nicely :D. But keep at it, you'll get there.

You might wanna look into getting beats from producers and working. Don't think commercial, etc. at the moment - just get good.
 
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