My First Recording Ever

[Physical Ill]

I've made beats for a while, but here is my first attempt at rapping ever, I even threw in a chorus and all those pretty thangs. Feedback would be veeeeery helpful.

Stressed



I use an SM58, by the way.

 

[KJ Beatz]

not bad man,beat is cool,flow is decent,need alil more emotion and you sliped a few times, but this is alot better than other peoples first audios. Stay up

 

[Physical Ill]

Thanks dude.

I put up another one...it's definetely better than the first one I did.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=657595&songID=5538293