What's da biz? If time permits goto http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/bloodlinemusic.htm , and listen to my song called If It's Hot It's Hot. Let me know what you think of it. holla bak
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Beat is aight, but it lacks a hard hitting kick IMO. Makes it seem empty to me.... but maybe thats just me...
Lyrically, you comin with a style that reminds me of Juvanile... got that "Orleans" drawl to it... very radio feel to it. Doesn't strike me as a "club banger" but, who knows if that was what you was going for...?
Overall, I'm liking this track dogg. Easy listening, not to abrassive for radio, and got a nice groove to it.
Good spits.
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Lyrically, you comin with a style that reminds me of Juvanile... got that "Orleans" drawl to it... very radio feel to it. Doesn't strike me as a "club banger" but, who knows if that was what you was going for...?
Overall, I'm liking this track dogg. Easy listening, not to abrassive for radio, and got a nice groove to it.
Good spits.
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PrettyChica
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I like the beat for "if it's hot it's hot". But I think the beat is waaaay louder than the voice. You remind me of Chingy on that song.
Abyyss
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The rapping is good, like always.
The beat is alright - I like the intro and it has a good movement to it. The drums aren't the tightest I think you could have had better drums. I think this track could do with a hard-hitting bassline as your vocals don't have much bass in them, so it should give it an all-round better feel. You would also benefit from more change-ups and a counter melody on the chorus.
Vocals could come up too.
Good work tho.
The beat is alright - I like the intro and it has a good movement to it. The drums aren't the tightest I think you could have had better drums. I think this track could do with a hard-hitting bassline as your vocals don't have much bass in them, so it should give it an all-round better feel. You would also benefit from more change-ups and a counter melody on the chorus.
Vocals could come up too.
Good work tho.
Hi_D_Ho_Man
Tha' So & So ,So & So
I'm digging this. a lil diff from your stuff from the recent past. This could work for the radio, but i'd fine tune the hook if i were to use it for radio. I takes a bit of listening to catch the main idea the way it is ( at least for me).