http://homerecording.com/bbs/ Trying to write songs and getting stuck with the lyrics, vocals or the music? Share your problems and solutions...for a song. en Sat, 21 Nov 2009 04:40:45 GMT vBulletin 2 http://homerecording.com/bbs/images/misc/rss.jpg http://homerecording.com/bbs/ http://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=292643&goto=newpost Thu, 19 Nov 2009 23:50:12 GMT Sometimes I read lyrics, and they have an immediate resonance with me.

This happened with, for example, Up-fiddler's Mississippi.

This time it is Icystorm's Winter Eyes that has trapped my attention.

So I had some fun fitting it to music.

Excuse voice, but the music sounds fine to me:
http://www.box.net/shared/9rt7ch6ai0 ]]> gecko zzed http://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=292643 http://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=292595&goto=newpost Thu, 19 Nov 2009 03:56:05 GMT This is a formal apology,
And I love you.
Written in cliche.
This is a farewell,
And good bye.
Written in a day.

You've wasted your time,
And so I'll keep wasting these lines.
Our love in your closet,
Your love on my floor.

We never drew the line,
And now we're crashing.
Like his car in your driveway,
Like his car in your driveway.
And now we're dashing,
From the starting line.
To the very end.(on your bedroom floor)

If I was a chance,
Then you we're a one night romance.
So turn me up,
And I'll turn you on.
We'll never feel the same,
With our clothes on.





I know it's not the best, But I would appreciate helpful suggestions. ]]> sethjewell http://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=292595